It was fun at times - but also too abstract for me - yet I found it incohesive overall. It just didn't really click as a whole and coherent essay. Not for me, at least.

I'm surprised that this have been published - or picked up - by Human Parts when you wrote much better pieces than this one. Don't get me wrong, it's still a unique essay, but knowing your work and the standard high quality you normally deliver, this one fell on the weaker side.

I dig your sense of humor and writing voice, it's quite disctinctive, but this turned out to be a bit weirder than I expected. That's all.